Can someone plz tell me if this is a good introduction for a sociology research paper?

Humans have once again discovered a new way to act as God. Surrogate motherhood, or the use of a woman’s body to carry a child for another couple, seems so unlikely and impractical; however it has been occurring often lately. The topic of debate with surrogacy in America today has to do with its morality and legality. Does surrogacy violate some social norms, and is it a form of a deviant behavior or a crime conceived illegal by law? Both the mother and the child are harmed by surrogacy, since it is inundated by emotional problems for all concerned and in fact will generate more troubles than it may solve; therefore surrogacy should be banned by law.